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Team: Ravenclaw
Challenge: Angst - Blitz und Donner - fürs Team
Titel: Lost
Fandom: Star Trek AOS
Charaktere: Jim Kirk, Scotty
Wörter: 370
Sprache: Englisch
Anmerkung: spielt ein klein wenig vor Beyond

Jim looked out of the cave, watched the heavy rain that was falling from the sky, listened to the loud thunder and smiled sadly in the light of a lightning. He never thought that he would miss something like that. Since he joined Starfleet his only aim had been to be captain of one of these big ships, flying through space and discover new worlds.

He had wanted this!

How could he feel so lost now?

He felt lonely on this big ship, although surrounded by thousand people. He felt hollow every morning he opened his eyes, looked at the same old ceiling of his quarters. He felt like a robot doing the same thing every single day.

Of course he knew he was not alone. He had friends. Bones, Spock, Scotty, Uhura, Sulu and Chekov. They were all his friends. But this didn’t change the fact that he felt lonely all the time, that he missed the Earth or just solid ground underneath his feet.

“Sir?” the voice echoed over his comms.

“Yes, Scotty? Have an update?” he answered and tried to let his voice sound casual.

“Unfortunately the repairs will take a wee bit of time. I’m sorry, sir.”

“Don’t be. It’s not so bad down here.” They had beamed the away team in smaller groups because the transporter had some problems. Before Jim could have been beamed back on board it completely broke. Now Jim was all alone on this planet.

“We detected a thunderstorm right above you. We just wanted to make sure you are okay.” There was a little pause before Scotty asked, “Are you, captain?”

A short smile flashed over his face. “I found a comfy little cave, made a fire. It’s really not so bad. Take your time.”

“Aye, sir.”

The sudden silence was interrupted by a loud thunder. A few seconds ago a lightning had washed the wood in front of him in a bright light.

Jim was alone but somehow he felt more alive than in the last couple of months. He could breathe.

Scotty could take his time because Jim already feared the moment he would set foot on the Enterprise again, feeling crushed and unable to breathe.

Feeling lost.

Date: 2016-09-26 07:39 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] der_jemand
Oh, was eine schöne Idee. Es passt so gut und ist was anderes als man sonst von Blitz und Donner erwarten würde.^^

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